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southwestmariner
March 6, 2013, 3:11pm
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Could you tell me if you can find any flaws etc on my new webpage? any improvement ideas may be beneficial too!


http://www.jackhowes.co.uk


all the best.

Jack


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March 6, 2013, 3:35pm
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No, obvious floors. Links seem to be alright. Very well made site. Do you have YouTube? It's a great way to get a fan base, link it to your Facebook, twitter and post it on your website. Just post a video or two (just a basic fixed image of you or your logo with links to your Facebook, twitter and website via annotations, I'll help you there, with your music in the background) and you're ready to go.
Hope I've helped,
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southwestmariner
March 6, 2013, 3:44pm
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Thanks Joe

If you search youtube for


Jack Howes - Up All night

i have been promoted by a few big music promoters , looking to work these into the site, although I have no videos on my personal youtube.

All my music is featured at soundcloud.com/jack-howes



Thanks!


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What can I say I'm a person of the web.
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Musics not that bad either. No, it's really good.
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southwestmariner
March 6, 2013, 4:02pm
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Thanks man! Means a lot!


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Rodley Mariner
March 6, 2013, 4:10pm
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If you want to improve it then get somebody to give it a decent proof-read. It looks nice but some poor spelling/punctuation lets it down a little. You may not care as I don't suppose, given what you do, that it's a principal concern. Sure you want to get it right though. Good luck.
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March 6, 2013, 4:12pm
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My management/webteam designed the site,

is there any spelling errors that drastically pop out at you? so i can pass them on.


Thanks for the help


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Rodley Mariner
March 6, 2013, 4:19pm
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It's probably more grammar than spelling. In the 'Note from Jack' section quite a few commas would be better changed to full-stops. For example the opening should be 'Welcome to my first look site. Firstly...' Also in the 'Diary Filling Up' section it should read 'There have also been big bookings..,' not 'has'. Quite a few things like that but nothing really major.

I am really nit-picking and it's not like you're selling yourself as an English tutor so it probably doesn't matter. I just know if it was me I'd want it right. It does look good and you're obviously doing well for yourself so all the best with it.
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southwestmariner
March 6, 2013, 4:23pm
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Thanks Rodley!

All the best,


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